Example Letter

Dear ______,

We are terribly sorry for our mistake. It is unacceptable that your club/picture/quote etc were not in the 2011 Shorecrest Loch. I hope that you can still enjoy your annual in light of our egregious mistake. We are working as a class to learn from this mistake and try to improve in future editions of the Loch.

Again we are very sorry for this editing error.

Sincerely,
Section Editor - PUT YOUR NAMES(S)

Apology Letters

While the 2011 Luch may be one of the more interesting aesthetic annuals we have produced, this years annual is FLUSH with mistakes. LOTS of mistakes.

Today you will be writing personal apology letters to all those staff, students, and clubs/groups impacted by our poor editing skills.

Senior Ads:

• Blake Hartley
• Janaki Nagarajan
• Madelyn R-P
  
• other spelling errors?

Senior Section:

• Janaki Nagarajan - wrong headshot
• Charlie Webber - wrong headshot
• Blake Hartley - misspelled name
• Al-Attal - misspelled name
• DJ Oliver - wrong pic
  
• Kevin Nguyen - wrong person's pic
• Nathan McIlvenna - not pictured list, but headshot with juniors
• Charlie Webber - apology to his mom about his quote, not OK.
  
• others I have not found

Organizations:

• no Art Club
• TONS of clubs without last names in the caption and misspelled (NHS)
  

Underclass:

• Cathy Lee/Le misspelled

Sports:

• tons of names spelled wrong: Katie Eshelmen, Melissa Ruhlman, etc

Photo J:

• A couple sports pics are underexposed

Faculty:

• Mr. Barkers caption is misspelled

more to find!

Edtainment schedule

Thursday 6-2

• Mariah & Steven
• Nick
• Emily

Monday 6-6

• Janie & Ted

Tuesday 6-7

• Chrruti, Natty, Alejandro
  
• Erika & Mara
• Sean D.